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20 phrases you can replace with one word

By Laura Hale Brockway | Posted: December 27, 2012
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Editor's note: This story first appeared on PR Daily in April.

Circumlocution is so prevalent in today’s corporate writing that we may not even notice it.

In case you’re unfamiliar, circumlocution is the use of many words when one will do. For example, writing “at this point in time” when “now” will work.

As PR Daily publisher Mark Ragan often points out at his seminars, readers have “an incredibly shrinking attention span.” As writers and editors, we need to communicate as clearly and concisely as possible. One way we can do this—avoid circumlocution.

Here are some examples:

Instead of         
Try                      

afford an opportunity
allow, let
as a means of
to
at this point in time now
due to the fact that because
during the period
during
has a requirement for
needs
in a timely manner
quickly, promptly
in accordance with
by, following, per, under
in advance of before
in regard to about, concerning, on
in the amount of for
in the event that
if
in the near future
shortly, soon
no later than June 1
by June 1
pertaining to about
provides guidance for
guides
under the provisions of under
until such time as until
with reference to about
with the exception of
except

Readers, any examples of circumlocutory writing that you would like to share?

Laura Hale Brockway is an Austin-based writer and editor. She is also the author of the blog impertinentremarks.com.

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